When Lily commits suicide, Sarah is left with all sorts of regrets. She struggles with her peers, her parents, her teachers, and herself.
I really liked the story idea, but I dont think I know enough about the subject matter. Sarah is a closet lesbian who has a catholic family, and Im a straight Jewish girl who isnt very religious. I attended a catholic school for a short while, but that didnt exactly give me all the information I needed. Besides all that, Im much more comfortable writing about the supernatural. I dont think Ive experienced enough of real life to write about it yet.
But the story idea remains. So I was thinking maybe I should try to add some supernatural elements to it? Maybe Sarah has to deal with some sort of monster? I dont know.
I need you guyss help, though. One of the main reasons I can never finish a story is because I lack motivation. And ideas. And feedback. Seriously, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK. Be as brutal as you like, I need feedback.








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I didnt attend the funeral, but I sent a nice letter saying I approved of it. - Mark Twain
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I didnt attend the funeral, but I sent a nice letter saying I approved of it. - Mark Twain
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